(Disclaimer: I'm not much of a drawing artist, so feel free to take anything I say here with a truckload of salt.)

Now, this is Fiona, so let me get the design thing out of the way. She came out pretty good, although she looks a lot more petite then I had in mind, but that's no big deal. I do like the blush on her cheeks, and her hair is beautiful, and I love the design on her top .

On the other hand, she doesn't quite have the impact of your other drawings. It's almost a bit drab compared to your other ones, but that's not really a big deal. She almost looks a bit chibi, but it really adds to the design.

All in all, it's good . From the sounds of things, you've been really busy as well, so you can disregard most of the criticism I've put here.