(Disclaimer: I'm not much of a drawing artist, so feel free to take anything I say here with a truckload of salt.)

With that, I love the detail on her clothes . I also like the ay you did her hair, and the folds in her clothes. The shading is impressive, too, especially on the ground that she's standing on.

Speaking of which, I like the background too. It gives things kind of an eerie look, with the stars, and the village.

Now on the other hand...

She is kind of skinny, for the character in mind, but considering I didn't have any example for you at all, it's understandable. It does make her look a bit less intimidating.

But the qipao was a nice surprise . I also liked the choice of colors you used on her clothes. Red and black fits her pretty well.

All in all, very nice. I do wish she was a bit bigger, but oh well. It definitely catches a person's eye.